Foulest Waters - adventure

I've finally finished my adventure (for Lamentations of the Flame Princess, specifically, but for any D&D version or clone as usual). I would really love some input on it, but no strings attached of course; it's free, and all yours to download and do what you want with.

The adventure can be found here on my blog:
http://deepdelving.wordpress.com/2013/0 … st-waters/