Okay, I did some proofreading:

Page 6, sentence 2: If the total is less (that - should be "than") zero

Page 12: Life span information for Elves is missing

Page 12: Under Halflings - feet are sufficiently protected and insulated that they suffer (not  - Should be "no") frostbite

Page 16: Under Lawful - Those who are Lawful in alignment are part of an inevitable destiny, but without knowledge of what that destiny is and what their role will be in fulfilling it and so (insert "are") forever looking for signs and omens to show them their proper way.

Page 16 - last sentence of Chaotic - Many mortals who are so desperately
wish they were not. (Fragmented - needs a re-write)

Cheers,

Phil